Below, is the final draft of our script; which takes place between the protagonist and his mother, over the phone. We will only be able to hear his side of the conversation, therefore we didn't write out a script for the mother.
[phone rings]
Killer:
[picks up the phone]
Hello...? Oh hi mum, yeah I'm fine.
The camera pans across the window-sill to show the blacked out photograph of his battalion, and a war medallion.
It then cuts to the killer again, tracking him as he heads towards the kitchen
I just saw it now; [ironically] it's awful how they keep finding more bodies...
[Pauses in wait for his mother's response]
I'm not a soldier anymore mum...[shows slight sign of distress] I left that behind years ago.
[Assertively; almost resentfully] Look, I'll be fine; if there's one thing I learnt out there, it was how to look after myself
[Turns to look at the drawer]
I'm just on my way out, can I call you back later?
Okay, take care, bye mum.
As he puts the phone down, he moves towards the drawer. On opening it, we see a close up of several poppies and a knife inside. He places the knife in his back pocket, picks up a poppy, and leaves the house.
Thursday, December 4, 2008
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